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`azarath Apr 13, 2009, 6:33:28 AM
A nice character design! The anatomy looks great. The shading and coloring is handled pretty well, although the shadow on her shoulder (the one facing us) seems a bit strange towards the top there, like it's too dark for that angle. I like the outfit and would like to see the whole thing. The eyes are shaded well, but seem a bit too far apart and a bit... empty. Maybe some darker hues in the middle and towards the top of them would make her look less like she's glazed over. Other than that, a more dynamic pose could help give me an idea of what her personality is like. Can't really gather anything from her just standing there.

I think you're on the right track here! Your coloring, inking and anatomy look great, now just try and spice up the design a bit. :D
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=senbonzakura-06 Apr 13, 2009, 11:29:52 AM
I do intend to revise the shading scheme of her shoulder when I actually revise the shading scheme of the whole character.

The shading of the eyes will be revised by the time this picture is finished.

I did have a dynamic pose in my mind when I was drawing this picture, but considering the fact that this is my very first time drawing this picture, a dynamic pose would make drawing the character from scratch more difficult. However, I can assure you that the second time I draw the character, she will have a much active and cooler pose.

Thanks for the fair critique.

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`azarath Apr 13, 2009, 11:37:21 AM
Sounds good! :D

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